FIRST DRAFT

AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

Statements I have taken into consideration are-

Add more information to the barcode- change its placement to the bottom right hand barcode, and add more information to it such as i.e Date,Issue,Price and also maybe the Web Address if needed.

Make my Masthead have more of an impact, it is Grey, I need something that stands out more against the background of my magazine.

A banner behind my Skyline would help, as the features are quite small and look 'lost' against the background of my Front Cover.

Less detail in the Sub-Heading of the Coverline, as 'less is more'. The Main Coverline also needs more impact- this would be very important for my magazine Front Cover.

The 'Splash' I should create to be more effective and not as basic.

My thumbnail picture is not rightfully owned by me- I will get rid of it and use my own images.

I am also going to consider removing the 'house/bedroom' background, as it is interfearing with my house style I have created. However I am also considering changing the main image and house style overall as a decision of my own.